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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
Posts 117


0 posted 2002-04-24 12:58 PM



Now the time is to recall
the mistakes, the passions
of it all

Cant say I'll be there at midnight
Cant say I can be your every delight
Cant say I'll love you through and through
Cant stand your moods so blue

So long now, on your own - endure your pain
you created its all the same
I opened your eyes to see the light
now adrenalin flows ready for
flight

Cant turn the horror of shows over
Dont want to be your long distance Romeo rover
Cant put a hollow man to rest
Cant put him through any tests

So long, adios, the curtain closes
the audience showers us with poses
into dust a memory made
of one mans sigular escapade no more.
Richy


( A bit rusty, but in another part of the world)

© Copyright 2002 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2002-04-24 10:30 PM


Well, you would be a bit rusty after clearing the forest away for heavens sake!! Lol. Good one Rich

So long, adios, the curtain closes
the audience showers us with poses
into dust a memory made
of one mans singular escapade no more.

Sometimes, that’s a nice place to be…the calm after the storm.

By the way, excuse my ignorance, but what are biots anyway?


If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (04-24-2002 10:33 PM).]

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2002-04-24 11:03 PM


I fear a heart has now been broken.  Quite a loss you would be.

Great write.

Hollowman
Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117

3 posted 2002-04-25 11:34 AM


ah - no hearts broken here - although one can write about sorrow or happiness with equal virtues.... Oooops and Boits is just made up word...  
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