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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2002-04-24 12:54 PM


Let me sing of my love, whose face is the moon.
Let me sing of her here, in this spritely tune.
Listen to her beauty in each and every line.
Listen to her grace in each and every rhyme.
Let me sing of my love for whom my heart swoons.

I saw her in the field where Wister was strewn.
To her womanly charms, I was not immune.
The moon was on the rise, the bells began to chime.
Let me sing of my love, whose face is the moon.

Her garments are of the softest silk hewn.
Her sighs like the wind that blows mid-June.
She speaks to me in words so sweet and sublime,
That I will be hers forever, throughout all of time.
Let me sing of my love, whose face is the moon.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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1 posted 2002-04-24 01:00 PM


"Her garments are of the softest silk hewn.
Her sighs like the wind that blows mid-June."




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this part stuck out to me the most, though the entire declaration of love is gorgeous! (big hugggsssss) May her face always be the moon to you and fill your heart with a happy glow, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-24 01:28 PM


MR~

what a lovely view, you have created here.....makes me wish for night time to arrive early... so I can gaze upon the moon and all it beauty.....


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

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3 posted 2002-04-25 02:46 AM


This is totally beautiful, Love.
Shows your heart, and its a wonderful view.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

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4 posted 2002-04-25 11:05 AM


It appears William has a rival!  Sheer talent my friend...  
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