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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-04-24 11:35 AM

“WOULD YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If I were blind
would you
guide me…

If I could see,
would you
still love me…
~~~~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-04-24 11:41 AM

Nicely put..as im sure she would..but i think where love is concerned it doesn't matter one way or the other..hugs

~Victoria

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-04-24 11:48 AM

If you could not breathe
I would be the air
that your lungs need

I see you clearly
Holding you dearly

great 20 or less Bill

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2002-04-24 11:50 AM

Would you ask
true intent

while my intent
is true?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-24 12:12 PM

(smiles) Oh Bill, I love this, and I know with all my heart no matter what happens or how you feel, your love will always be so lucky to have such a wonderful compassionate man like you close to her heart! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-04-24 12:15 PM

Bill,
Short and sweet, enjoyed.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-04-24 12:15 PM

Wonderful Bill!
My this is catching on!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-04-24 12:16 PM

enjoy your read

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-04-24 01:24 PM

Bill - "Yes" - Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-04-24 01:37 PM

Bill~

"Always"~....

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-04-24 04:08 PM

Surely any of your many friends here at
Passions would do that for you BC...

Nice, soft and very heartfelt write.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2002-04-24 04:17 PM

you've got this 20 or less thing down pretty good my friend. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

12 posted 2002-04-24 05:32 PM

*sigh*
I would have you lean on me
if you were blind
I would share the world I see
from loving mind

Absolutely wonderful writing, Bill....Love sees with a vision all its own...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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