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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-04-24 10:10 AM


“MUST BE DREAMING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Always on my mind,
it certainly accrues…
Thinking of you,
writing the blues…

Songs from my pen,
comes from inside…
Rhythm is there,
my heart its guide…

Pondering at times,
words to you I write…
How you captured me,
during my plight…

Must be dreaming,
knowing one to believe…
Trusting it’s real,
you won’t deceive…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-24 10:12 AM


like the way this flows gently with emotions nicely done
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2 posted 2002-04-24 10:13 AM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is so dreamy and beautiful, I hope now you not only dream but your dream has come true and now you strum guitar with the one you love at hearts content! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-24 06:12 PM


always nice when we have someone to inspire us..nicely done Bill...

               ~Victoria

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4 posted 2002-04-24 06:25 PM


This was simply beautiful Bill and so very much enjoyed.

Take care.....Sue

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5 posted 2002-04-24 09:28 PM


What is the old adage???

Once bitten,  twice scorned or something
like that....

I sense the desire, yet also the uncertainty.
Lots of feelings within this write BC...

Your usual delicate touch...

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6 posted 2002-04-26 03:15 PM


Magnus hit it right on the head BC. . . but, sometimes. . . you just have to say. . ."what the heck??"

besides. . . well. . . you know the rest. . .

great work. . .

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7 posted 2002-04-26 03:19 PM


enjoyed....
your words always seem so real...
~~ Connie ~~

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8 posted 2002-04-26 03:26 PM


Wonderful, as always Bill!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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