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The Visit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost with additon: The Visit Dear Nan My head on your pillow as a guest in your bed And my spirit danced with the dreams in your head. Frolicked in the mist of this fantasies play And walked on the beach of wiles of the day. There could be no better time I could spend Then the time I spent with those dreams and a friend Our actual talk was like tea with a lime But I really had a very good time. You are one of a kind, this I must say With kindness and love you went out of your way You toured us and fed us and tend to our needs Like flowers just planted with kindness and deeds. You made us feel like we reached Shangri-la A thousand mile trip to the home of a star Your hug and your kiss just turned us to butter Felt almost as good as those of a lover If I knew the trip would turn out this well I’d have left home my dear wife, Isabel. PS. The couplet I stole from Balladeer. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sounds like a good visit to me! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My head on your pillow as a guest in your bed And my spirit danced with the dreams in your head. Frolicked in the mist of this fantasies play And walked on the beach of wiles of the day. ====================================== You made us feel like we reached Shangri-la A thousand mile trip to the home of a star Your hug and your kiss just turned us to butter Felt almost as good as those of a lover ===================================== All the poems, pics and memories shared by you guys make us all feel the love and the bonds of friendship formed and make us all feel like we were there. thank you for sharing  A butterfly once told me... "there is no distance between us when our hearts hold hands across the miles."  heart in hand, Tinker   |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This sounded like such a wonderful time, sweet friend, I hope you had a wonderful vacation and I can't wait to see the many more wonderful poems you write about times like these! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You write a great 'bread and butter' note, sir~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Sy! I'm reading all these posts about the trip.. and I am wishing more and more I had been there. Thanks to you and the others... we have all been able to take part in this wonderful journey, and, meeting of kindred hearts. ~Hugs~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful memories , loving and sweet Hope |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy HOW do you do that? write the morning with delight and wonder? MMmmm? Well however you do it darling heart DON’T stop, as I’ve said before, you make my day complete. The world doesn’t stop spinning, the sun continues to rise and to set, but …….. without your writing my world feels unfinished. Exquisite writing as always, thank you love……. now the world can continue and my day won’t be cast into the shadow of grey.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
You are one of a kind, this I must say With kindness and love you went out of your way Seymour, this says it all. Very sweet! ((Seymour)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SY~ Keep telling us all about that trip.....I know there are a bunch of people who would have loved to have gone.....a wonderful, special walk you take us on.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-24-2002 09:54 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My poets just keep leaving me with smiles of their recollections of the trip... what I garner from all of this is that our Nan is the hostess with the most[est] class.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Passsing Shadows, It was and thank you. JM, where ever I go, you go, didn't you know? :sqyeeze: WWRSNoah, thank you friend. Enchantress, I too wish you were there, hugs and kisses back. HopeS, Thank you my dear. Marsha, Then let me finish your day by saying I love you and missed you. Neweel, Thank you dear friend. Lauren, You would have had a ball. I'll be posting poems about the people but I never post more than one a day. Thanks for the comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Like flowers just planted with kindness and deeds. And those flowers of friendship have blossomed on these blue pages for all of us to enjoy. *S* I'm sure this will melt Nan's heart... further fusing the bonds you've formed. *S* Beautiful!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, What would I do without you. You always rescue me in the fast stream of poetry. Love Ya. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
With kindness and love you went out of your way You toured us and fed us and tend to our needs Like flowers just planted with kindness and deeds." Seymour~ Awww! This is lovely! I'm not surprised a visit with Nan inspired this, she does seem like she would be the best kind of hostess I'm so glad you shared this little tidbit from your trip.*hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sounds like a wonderful time with wonderful friends!! Enjoyed this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmittenKitten Thank you, your comment and my visit were both a pleasure. Chris, It was a warm and wonderful visit, thank you. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sounds like everyone had a ball..enjoyed Sy..ive been reading and looking at all the pics..glad you had a great time in cape cod..hugs ~Victoria |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Glad you had a great time Sy..this is a nice complement! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you for the trips through your memories....well done Syes.... Like a red brick, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wictoria, Wish you could have been in on all the kissing and huggin. LOL Sy Ecivan, Thank you for the nice relpy. Gentle Spirit, Wish you could have been there. Sy |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Sy, the poem was wonderful and it figures that Balladeer had to have the last word doesn't it? I miss you two, take care.Imagination is more important that knowledge |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, A fitting tribute to a wonderful person. Though it is not likely we shall ever meet in the physical realm, I applaud your works, and the style with which they are presented. Doc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Thank you sweet, glad you got home safe. Watch for my poem on Kit tomorrow. Love Sy Dr Moose1, Nice of you to comment, thank you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL...Sy, this is wonderful! Nan was such a gracious host was she not? I enjoyed my visit with you all more than words can say |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ruth, If I ever go to other meetings, I'd like you to be there too. Love Sy |
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