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Rambling...under a lantern
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Rambling...under a lantern |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Could it be that reality never one of the best states of mind has come around to my way of thinking? See I knew I was right all along it just took awhile for the powers that be also to see my point. I have waited many years for you never knowing that I waited… content in my ignorance of love. Many hearts, many hands have touched me and I fell in love, easily until you redefined everything I knew. Suddenly, the days before us have blurred focus struggling to catch up with reality some days are grainy some days, clear. I so need to relax in this love under a lantern and a starless sky if only for a night to dream forever stumbling forward I hope to meet you there. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh, big sighs here Cowboy  this rocks |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Suddenly, the days before us have blurred focus struggling to catch up with reality some days are grainy some days, clear. *snaps* grins... sigh. ...HUGS. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I so need to relax in this love under a lantern and a starless sky if only for a night to dream forever stumbling forward I hope to meet you there. what comes2my mind upon reading this jewel I find... -> awesome poem <- Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Susan is so right...this rocks indeed! I think I'll set up camp next door and do the same. What an awesome plan. Way to go, this was so cool. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
See I knew I was right all along it just took awhile for the powers that be also to see my point. I have waited many years for you never knowing that I waited content in my ignorance of love. Many hearts, many hands have touched me and I fell in love, easily until you redefined everything I knew. ================================= *smiling at you* I think I will let Jackson say better than I will--what this poem said to me... Excerpt from "Hold Out" By Jackson Browne Dedicated to Duncan & Tracy  "You're a hold out ... Well I'm a hold out too But it took me all this time to figure out Something you already knew Will love be true? Can it pull you through? How long? How strong? Somethings depend on you See-- I always figured I was going to meet somebody here and I don't know why Why should love come down and suddenly just sweep me away I want to fly But there are so many things in my way Anyway... I guess you wouldn't know unless I told you But... I love you Well just look at yourself-- What else would I do?" Now for me some words come easy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this one, of course I'm a female too. It hit me just right! I am waiting for this guy to write something like this for me...waiting...waiting....waiting... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write Duncan! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
*sigh* I'll be back with a better response tonight...can you believe..they expect me to work round here, instead of read and write poetry!!! The nerve!! Lol If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Something tells me in your relax, you will not be alone, long... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is soooooo beautiufl, sweet friend, this poem indeed rocks, I love it! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may all your thoughts become fantasies come true in loves true touch! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dincan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very real. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I have waited many years for you never knowing that I waited… content in my ignorance of love. *sighs* Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I so need to relax in this love under a lantern and a starless sky if only for a night to dream forever stumbling forward I hope to meet you there. I know just the lantern, filled with sweet smelling candles…race ya!! Lol Love JM’s Jackson Browne song. I’ll have to find a copy of that..i’d never heard that one of his before. Sometimes love cannot be found When all of life is holding down Until you find the one to share Who holds your heart to ever care Keeping love under the stars Dreams that are forever ours Hold that dream and hold that thought Moments that in time are caught If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wow, this is a real epic by your standards, Duncan guy....and a darn good one, too. At times like this, I wanna write like YOU! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I should just ditto Passing Shadows... for I felt every word she wrote. *S* This is really great, Duncan! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I so need to relax in this love under a lantern and a starless sky if only for a night to dream forever stumbling forward I hope to meet you there. yep, this rocks....this is so warm and inviting...so well written!! Hugs to you Duncan. Like a red brick, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, this is wonderful. Much enjoyed, and glad to hear happiness in your words. Sandra |
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