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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2002-04-23 08:43 PM


I haven't written any poem
Of little Hannah for a while.
I wonder why? She oozes song
From her little feet to her smile.

She's fifteen months old now you know,
And each day is growing sweeter.
She smiles and welcomes me with "Hi",
And a kiss, if I entreat her.

She has already known tragedy,
But is blessedly unaware.
Black trouble in her perfect world
Is just too terribly unfair.

When Daddy held her close she was
As safe as any child could be.
Hannah's still in her little nest
But her daddy's not there to see.

Sometimes when she's in Mommy's arms,
Looking up at the starry sky,
Hannah smiles her endearing smile
And calls out to her daddy, "Hi".

By: Joyce 4/23/02

(Hannah's daddy died 2/09/02)

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (04-23-2002 08:53 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-04-23 08:49 PM


Tears came down my cheeks when I read this beautiful tribute. So much strength and so much love in the creation of one so young.
ThisDiamond

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2 posted 2002-04-23 08:50 PM


Joyce~
How lovely to see you bring Hannah to visit us in open~
I'm sure she's as lovely and sweet as you've portrayed her~

Knowing the tragedy of the loss of her father, just breaks our hearts too~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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(big hugggssssss) Oh Joyce, this is sooooo heartbreaking, my heart goes out to you and Hannah and my thoughts are with her always and while deep down I know she will always be hurt by not getting to see her father, she will always love you so much! (wipes tears) My thoughts are with you both, sweet friend, this about broke my heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-04-23 09:24 PM


sorry to hear of your loss, I hope that you will be spared further sadness..courageous write indeed


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-04-24 04:02 PM


Lovely writing...James
Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-04-24 08:40 PM


Joyce - this is a most beautiful poem that brought a tear to my eye. I'm sorry for your loss. May peace walk with you...

BC

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7 posted 2002-04-24 09:17 PM


Joyce....you and Hannah have my greatest
sympathy.....This is a very touching poem.
It touched me a great deal..

amusemi
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8 posted 2002-04-24 09:20 PM


What a tear jerker.  My thoughts and prayers go out to you both.  A very powerful and beautiful piece.
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9 posted 2002-04-25 12:50 PM


Joyce, I'm so sorry for the sorrow that has come into your lives... how horribly, heartbreakingly unfair. But I know Hannah faces life with an abundance of love... and I know you'll all help her know and remember the Daddy who had to leave too soon. This is beautiful.
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