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Heart Heavy
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Heart Heavy |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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In a downward motion spiraled out of control lost in raw emotion we forget mind and soul Darkness feeds this hurts ache freeing its hunger's heart preying for loving's sake ripping within apart When the wait loses hold slipping through silence timed pangs of fear lay unscold falling to depths unclimbed Settled in dust to be my remains heart heavy create an addiction .... share a smile!! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Craig~ oh indeed this is a lonely feeling, one I know too well....Peace to you, bear hugssss too....  Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You translated the feeling quite vividly. It does seem like a physical weight, doesn't it? A somber read, but I don't mind.  Well done, m'friend. The emotion hit home. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now your heart has been softened by loves joy and hope! (sigh) I think we can all relate to this feeling, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very well said and I know that weight too well. Joyce |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A sad and somber...but excellently penned poem Craig...Nicely done! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you , both ladies and gentle men. Though a sad and somber piece, it relays the message that one with such a weight to bare is never really alone, we all have felt its ache. Perhaps together there is a cure. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
absolutely wonderful in your wisdom Craig...perhaps....just maybe!! Great writing...*s* Like a red brick, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bumping ya back to the top~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Craig You have such a beautiful way with words that captures the attention of the reader and leaving her spellbound. I loved this. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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