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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-04-23 03:29 PM


You reach into your heart
taking me to those places
you had buried so deep
inside
that you had forgotten
they ever existed...
Together we walk
hand in hand
along the edges
of your dreams...
Your eyes show
the soul of a spirit
that could not remember
how to fly,
and all I could do
was take your hand
and through tears of love
whisper amidst the sounds
of silence....

I am here~


I could feel the flicker
of your flame
reaching,
reaching for the sky
that it might again
burn with the passion
for life that it once held...
as tears fell....
falling from eyes of blue
as you took me
to your hidden heart places,
and I...
I with all my love for you
could only whisper...

I am here~



(more rambling thoughts....)


Theres a man in his own prison,
with a crime that nobody knows
he has sentenced himself to die
with no chance of pardon or parole..
he's lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-23-2002 03:32 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-04-23 03:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
Sven
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2 posted 2002-04-23 04:34 PM


you are here. . . now, be where you are. . .

wonderful GS. . . just wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2002-04-23 11:01 PM


This is a wonderful poem!!! I love it.
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-04-23 11:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is such a lovely ramble, sweet friend, may your love always be there with you and together may you find special places in each others hearts forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-23 11:31 PM


Bravo!!

a most beautiful write, Donna~  a soft whisper, of tender thoughts....


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Larry C
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6 posted 2002-04-23 11:51 PM


Donna,
It's always nice to know...very nicely done.

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