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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-04-23 11:01 AM



~Fairy Tale Love~

Call me a dreamer of rainbow’s hue
Say once again the words I love you
Tell me that angels whisper my name
Bathe me once more in lover’s flame
Feed me on honey and ambrosia wine
Hold me close and say all is fine
Don’t tell me that this can’t ever last
I’m bidding farewell to failure’s past

Talk to me of wishes that fairy gift
Breathe into my soul give me a lift
Speak to me of dragons flying high
Scattering diamonds throughout the sky
Wrap me in hope and hold me tight
Kiss me and make everything all right
Don’t tell me that all dreams will fail
I want to soar on the dragon’s trail

Call me foolish for wishing this
Leave me sleeping wrapped in bliss
Show me the magic that you do
Conjure me a spell made for two
Paint my sky with fairy’s dust
Prove to me that souls don’t rust
Don’t let monsters come after me
Let this tale end they lived happily

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-23 11:53 AM


Marsha, darling girl. Wow! I have no mortal words to express my feeling about your writing, goddess of lover's heaven. Your writing is simply spectacular, glowing above all rainbows and stars in far-off heavens that God must have made just for your beautiful words. O BTW, did I say that I like this? Well I do. I love it! Yes!! I love it. I have never seen you write better than this, Mushy.

And yes I love it!

((Marsha))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-23-2002 11:54 AM).]

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-04-23 11:56 AM


MarshaLove~

With words such as these ....

'Call me foolish for wishing this
Leave me sleeping wrapped in bliss
Show me the magic that you do
Conjure me a spell made for two
Paint my sky with fairy’s dust
Prove to me that souls don’t rust
Don’t let monsters come after me
Let this tale end they lived happily'


.... he could not resist !

You paint the happy ending so well~
May his palette of love touch your all~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-04-23 11:58 AM


Deliciously happy. I have the same dreams. I hope yours come true.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-04-23 01:09 PM


I’m bidding farewell to failure’s past


you are writing with such heart Marsha..and I believe in FairyTales..and in happy endings

hugss
M

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5 posted 2002-04-23 05:00 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautfully breathtaking, sweet friend, may your prince always sweep you away on his magic carpet ride and make all your dreams come true and place that glass slipper upon your feet always and dance to eternity! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!


May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-04-23 05:14 PM


Marsha,
You have a beauty that some do not see.
You have a beauty the deapth of the sea.
Come fly with me to Shangri-la
A minds throw to the nearest star.
Love ya.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-04-23 05:16 PM


quote:
Show me the magic that you do
Conjure me a spell made for two



Yes!

Magnus
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8 posted 2002-04-23 08:34 PM


Mushy.....Less IS more.....and this is
JUST RIGHT!!!!!

Love the part about dragons....one of my
favorite subjects....other than Knights,
of course....

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