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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2002-04-23 06:08 AM


Teary Eyes

I
Am
Eye
Open
Teary
Across
Sadness
Remember
Forgiving

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2002 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-23 10:14 AM


Interesting. Nicely done, Daniel.
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2 posted 2002-04-23 11:45 AM


Love the way the words shape into a teardrop. enjoyed. chris

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3 posted 2002-05-17 01:08 PM


I love this.

                     Dawn

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4 posted 2002-05-17 01:09 PM


If my teardrops were that long, ah'd call the doctor! Enjoyed th' creativity.

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-TON

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5 posted 2002-05-17 01:10 PM


Interesting write
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6 posted 2002-06-05 12:38 PM


Love it!!

_,,,^.^,,,_
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7 posted 2002-06-05 12:51 PM


daniel, i have missed you and your poems!
you know I love this. (hugs)

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8 posted 2002-06-05 12:54 PM


Daniel J D
Very nice enjoyed the read.

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9 posted 2002-06-05 12:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Daniel, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for true joy to come to you soon and I know you will find it and cry tears of joy soon! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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