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Dance My Heart
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Dance My Heart |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Dance My Heart show me the art dance my heart teach it new steps flowing to deeper depths given wings to soar fill it way past more |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady dancer with feather feet float on the clouds of morning give the sun your eyes enjoyed this slick 1 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
left foot first helen. . .  love this. . . perfect in form and function. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, Enough said, well done, enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - from your words your heart learns... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Very nicely choreographed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Envious here, of the pure joy in your words. You do this very well, Helen. Scant words that suggest so much! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Grow wings my heart, follow her from cloud to cloud, ere she be lost in the mist... hear the music and dance, just beyond her sight. lovely write my friend... jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen, This one dances ever so gently down the page with such joy!! Love it!! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A most interesting dance this would be.... Nicely done Helen.. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
< dance my heart teach it new steps flowing to deeper depths>> I so much like these lines. No one ever listened themselves into trouble. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, I just love how you spread your hearts wings in this poem and dance with the joy in your heart! (kiss on cheek) May love always dance your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi1Slick Nicely penned dearPoetFriend... HugsNsmiles2u *~coco~* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, That must mean you have enough to share! I really, really like this. So well done... It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Bump I'm trying Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice little compact poem of desire. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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