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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-04-22 07:53 PM



Night Sip

stir me up
the perfect night
spilling the sky
with thick syrupy
foaming blackness
winds that
lick you softly
in it’s sticky liquid
with stars dancing
at the top
of this tender drink
keeping the sips
cool in
the sultry moon lit
confectionary treat



© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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1 posted 2002-04-22 08:06 PM


Sooo, that's where you've been . . . sounds yummy.
Nice to see you back here, h.

e

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-04-22 09:24 PM


1slick_lady - and where might this delicate place be hiding at?

BC
  

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-04-22 11:33 PM


This made me feel...tropical winds, and the humidity of the day lifting with each gust.
I could smell the salt. Well done, lady!

Temptress
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4 posted 2002-04-23 12:18 PM


Goodness, Lady..you write so wonderfully. I hope things are well with you. I haven't noticed you on in a while.
  

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-04-26 05:43 PM


I'll take a double!
Magnus
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6 posted 2002-04-26 05:46 PM


You are bringing out my sweet tooth Helen..

Love the vision....Ummmmmmm

jwesley
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7 posted 2002-04-26 06:37 PM


Gee, this just brings up all kinds of visions, tastes and other delightful, wonderful...er,
better quit before I'm censored here...Enjoyed this much, my friend.

jwesley

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8 posted 2002-04-26 07:15 PM




(smiles) This is such a delicious and yummy dedication of true love, sweet friend, may you awlays soak up the sun and the light of the moon with your love forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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