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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-04-22 10:19 AM


To Hold You

I'd do anything to just hold you right now
I know that can't be...but I wish it was somehow
I want to look at your sweet beautiful face
Please lord transport me back to her space

The sadness inside me I simply can't hide
I'm waiting here for you arms open wide
Please, I don't want to live without you anymore
I want to hold you and to the heavens we'd soar

I'd give all I have to hold you once again
See me here with my outstretched hand
I can't sleep another night without you
There are no more colors to paint me blue

Somehow, we must be together, I don't want to
wait any longer
Daily this love we feel becomes so much stronger
I miss your green eyes, looking deep into mine
Always and forever, I will love you...till the end of time

Please come be with me, share this life
I love you darling, become my wife
Place your hand into mine, don't ever look back
Our love will win out, no matter the attack

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-04-22 10:34 AM


Amy darling lil sis of my soul you’ve written an absolute stunner here an absolutely outstanding poem. The flow of this is utterly utterly divine. Oh WOW when YOU write you really write, this is utterly utterly fabulous. This is so incredibly outstanding I love it love it love it,


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-04-22 10:39 AM


Amy, a beautiful write.

((Amy))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-04-22 11:27 AM


who could ever deny you of these heartfelt requests! Very good writing
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4 posted 2002-04-22 05:45 PM


"Please come be with me, share this life
I love you darling, become my wife
Place your hand into mine, don't ever look back
Our love will win out, no matter the attack"




(big hugggssssss) This is another powerful yearning from your golden heart, sweet friend, I too would give anything to have my Joanna close to my heart for I love her so so much and she makes me happy everyday! (kiss on cheek) May love always hold you close and may you always be the wife to one so dear, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-22 09:10 PM


Amy,

   I do know where you are coming from.  There is nothing more I want than to hold Dave and never let go.  I can always relate so well to you

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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