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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-04-22 09:47 AM

I Miss

I miss you...I miss your very touch
I knew I loved you, just not this much
I see your face, when I close my eyes
But when I open them and you're not there, I start to cry

Because...you are there and I am here
I start to shed a crystal tear
The tears fall down my cheek
I look to God to help me from feeling so weak

I'd walk a thousand miles just to see your smile
At least my heart would be happy for a while
My heart will always be right there with you
Wherever you go, whatever you do

I know you feel the same
I felt your love with the way you spoke my name
We try to be strong, but we fight back the tears
The truth is we fall apart, without each other near

I don't know how, and I don't know when
All I know is soon I'll be seeing you again
I miss you, I miss you so much baby
Forever you will be my sweet wonderful lady

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-04-22 10:05 AM

Amy darling lil sis of my heart, I could just say something short like this is good writing? Noooooooooooo of course not, because it’s not good writing, it’s stunningly fabulous writing. YOU are a superb writer my lil sis.

Fabulous writing Absolutely excellent I love the lines, and the construction you really have expressed so much in this. Excellent. Utterly utterly beautiful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-04-22 11:40 AM

you've just penned my exact feelings towards someone who I am missing right now!
They say that time apart makes the heart grow fonder, that is so true.

(hugs)

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (04-22-2002 11:41 AM).]

See me?
Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

3 posted 2002-04-22 12:38 PM

like rose petal said u just penned how im feeling at the moment as well, this is a beautiful poem, great write,
God Bless
Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-22 05:39 PM

(sigh) Oh Amy, I now just how you feel, I'm deeply in love with someone so very special to me that I think of everyday (you know who you are, wink wink)

and I want to have her so very much and make her happy forever! (kiss on cheek) I hope love has found your heart, sweet friend, you deserve it so very much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-22-2002 05:39 PM).]

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