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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-04-21 08:55 PM


What do you do, when you get so down
You can’t get up no matter how hard you try
After trying so hard to keep yourself up
You end up feeling like you just want to cry

Withdrawing from all the world outside
Never going out into the daylight
Depression finally gets the best of you
These feelings I do continuely fight

So many things I have inside my head
They seem so jumbled up inside
But, to get them all out on paper
I just can not seem to write


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-21 09:00 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, I know this feeling all so well, believe me, and I believe that the best way to get through this situation is to write iout everything you feel in rambles, for we will always be here for you when you need someone to talk to, you will always be a friend in me! (kiss on cheek) You are a true angel, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-23 01:42 PM


SweetSuzieQ~

You 'get them all out on paper'
and share with friends~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Sven
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3 posted 2002-04-23 04:39 PM


sit down. . . and begin. . . that's it. . .

this is a start. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-04-23 04:43 PM


SmartChick,
If you can write this you can write others.
Well done enjoyed.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-04-28 05:46 AM


yes, I share the feeling...you are not alone.
Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-04-28 09:39 AM


SmartChick - I share your feelings well. Just when I think I'm alone with these feelings, I see others are also with them. Peace be with you my friend...

BC

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7 posted 2002-04-28 11:28 AM


You can write hon..remember you are a smartchick

                      ~Victoria

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