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rwood
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0 posted 2002-04-21 08:52 PM


My breeze had stolen journey
thought lashing forward
I suppose I was thirsty

A guitar riff introduced me
to a stranger mood
one that I could hear beneath
the palms of beating seduction

When my quiet moments of restless
met with the notion of something hot
something so far from my mind
yet so damn close
I sat in sunlight melting
from the very thoughts you gave me
slowly
like some blues tune intoxication
like some salsa snake charming me
into the bite of your touch

You thought my spin was slight
I’m no dizzy woman of new love
I just really like being inside
the body of extraordinary
and celebrate that old feeling
that deja vu of knowing you

wanting to drink your ingredients
wanting to wear your love
as the scent of your devotion

In this lava day turning hotter
our villa undone
and lazing in wide open
let your ocean
come and tear my mountain down



[This message has been edited by rwood (04-22-2002 05:59 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-21 08:57 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...your poems certainly dance tango in this gorgeous poem, sweet friend, I heard salsa music and Latin rock reading this! (kiss on cheek) May love always wear you with devotion and promise, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-21 09:35 PM


When my quiet moments of restless
met with the notion of something hot
something so far from my mind
yet so damn close

Oh Regina - your words are awesome! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-04-21 10:19 PM


Regina....be careful with this one....it is
sizzling....Beaautifulllllly done....

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4 posted 2002-04-21 10:38 PM


As always, done with style!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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5 posted 2002-04-22 02:00 AM


Reg,
What a finish! You're ready for that huh? Wow...

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-04-22 02:32 AM


I’m no dizzy woman of new love
I just really like being inside
the body of extraordinary
and celebrate that old feeling
that deja vu of knowing you


you captured my thoughts with this one Regina, very nicely done
M

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7 posted 2002-04-22 05:59 AM


seems like a lady
has found a woman
and they are great friends


someone is lucky...
enjoyed it Regina

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2002-04-22 07:37 AM


When my quiet moments of restless
met with the notion of something hot
something so far from my mind
yet so damn close
I sat in sunlight melting
from the very thoughts you gave me
slowly
like some blues tune intoxication
like some salsa snake charming me
into the bite of your touch

You thought my spin was slight
I'm no dizzy woman of new love
I just really like being inside
the body of extraordinary
and celebrate that old feeling
that deja vu of knowing you

wanting to drink your ingredients
wanting to wear your love
as the scent of your devotion
======================================


A salsa snake? How cool is that??????????
Girlie...this is one very very cool write...
like a hot summers breeze on damp skin...
mmm mmm mmm ... love the passion and need in this... the fire that is buring the edges of your lines. So good to have you back...hows the remodeling coming? Does Martha Stewart write salsa poetry? me thinks not   lol

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9 posted 2002-04-22 01:39 PM


r,

"Strangely" sensual, perhaps, but in your hands, exciting!  And this one keeps getting better.

e

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10 posted 2002-04-22 02:57 PM


"that deja vu of knowing you. . . "

you know why I like this line Regina. . . well done. . .

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