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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-04-21 06:09 PM

Here I stand before you
I'm like the cat who got the cream
As I rub my eyes disbelievingly
As tho' I am living in a dream

But as you take my hand in yours
I realise these feelings are for real
You pull me in so closely
As one of my kisses you now steal

Such a love I'd never felt
Such tenderness virtually unheard
Many feelings of love and desire
Within my soul were beginning to stir

When you whisper my name
I feel I am floating on air
To feel you here beside me
As you tell me how much you care

I've finally found my soulmate
I need not search anymore
Your love flows throughout my veins
And holds the key to my heart's door

Suetang

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-04-21 06:21 PM

Sue darling girl Ohhhhhhh how I love this piece of yours it has style it has grace it flows across the page with perfection. Its timing is excellent, as are the words

Thank you darling heart this is exquisite, and I know you’re going to say YOU always say that but that’s because you always write so beautifully and so well.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-04-21 06:25 PM

Sue,
Hope you have a ring for that key! Nice write.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-04-21 06:35 PM

Superbly done Sue....That little four letter
word (love) certainly does flow from this
poem...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-21 08:21 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, I always smile when I think of my dream girl and how her heart would hold the key to mine! (kiss on cheek) May true love always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-04-22 05:05 AM

Your words are flowing tenderly...James

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