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Three Words |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Three Words I love you. Three simple words That are the most Complicated we have. Three little words that Everyone waits to hear. That everyone wants to Be able to say with truth Three tiny words That can cause so much Happiness and elation Three small words That can change a life With a quiet whisper A gentle caress of the heart Its amazing what words can do How they can heal And brighten a soul I love you. Honest words, easy to say If meant with your heart But yet they are not said Nearly enough to those who Need to hear it most. One day it will be to late. The time will have passed Our chance faded away. This was just a... ramble .. I guess that is what I would call it.lol. I just wrote what first came to mind and didnt change anything. Not my best I know..but considering I have written next to nothing in the past month, I thought I would share anyway. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tara, this is such a gorgeous ramble, sweet friend, I hope now you can share these three words with the one you love always and find them echoing to you with sincere meaning! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well, I happen to like this! Share away anytime, Tara  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We can never say or do it too much...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
when in doubt. . . it's amazing what you'll find back here when you look. . . great work Tara. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25 - not a ramble to me, as your words are so very true. At times I wonder how much time there is left to say those three words... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Guilty!! That is me, guilty of not saying nearly enough how I love those I do love... Thank you for a honest write and one we all can learn from....Hugs Tara... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love how it evolves toward the end ... from romance to sober realization. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
those three little words aren't that difficult to say!..liked the way you put thoughts to words |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yep, three important words, for sure....they almost beat out "What's for dinner?" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
go ahead...ramble...I love rambles.... lol at Deer...... Like a red brick, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Tara~ Awwww, its lovely....and I think they are so important to say, no matter how you say them..we all need to be reminded that love is out there....  HUGSSSSLauren~ ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-27-2002 02:07 AM).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I understand what you've said it very well. Yes, sometimes it can be too late. And yes, these three small words are so easy to say for some and yet so hard to say for others. Nice work, Tara. It's good to see you posting again, my friend. *hugs* Michael |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn fine rambling piece, Tara. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi RP25, it's always a treat2find a gem you've penned and quite honestly this one as you say a rambling au contraire my friend cuz me thinx it's splendid and I'm happy2have had this chance2come across this post2nite... HugsNsmiles2UalwaysPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ramble on, this was just so meaningful!!Lovely poem!!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, ramble on, and on, and on, and .... I loved it |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Wow.. I never expected this poem to get this many responses.. that is how it always goes though lol. Usually win I really like a poem, it will get maybe 2 replies. When I think no one will read it, everyone does *chuckles* Thank you all for stopping in and reading. I'm glad you liked it  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
i read it too! and i liked it! although i freely admit i have been known to be blindingly biased in your direction - i tend to think that (what with the overwhelming number of replies) i am not alone in appreciating this poem - although maybe not QUITE for the same reason as everyone else -Dave |
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