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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-04-21 01:33 PM




When peaceful Sunday
gives way
to Mad Monday,
I smile and remember
how Saturday felt,
anticipating
peaceful Sunday
with you.

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-21 01:43 PM




(smiles) Wow, I love the dizzy feel to this poem, I love how it winded like a top and went from present to future tense and then to past and back to present thoughts! (kiss on cheek) This is a delightful Sunday read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-21 01:47 PM


Kacy,
So what's wrong spending a Sunday with me?

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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3 posted 2002-04-21 01:53 PM


Noah, please don't get dizzy on my merry-go-round! I'm just sitting back and enjoying all these Pipster poetic rides.

Larry, we are together now, aren't we? Happy sunday to you, and your circle of loved ones.

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4 posted 2002-04-21 01:59 PM


OH KACY, I LOVE THIS!
Happy Sunday to you!
~Hugs~

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5 posted 2002-04-21 02:06 PM


Nancy, your reply is like a big warm hug. Thanks!
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6 posted 2002-04-21 05:40 PM


Midnitesun darling girl, this is utterly utterly wonderful, I love this. This reads so beautifully,. Absolutely wonderful I love the merry go round of life don’t you? Mmmm

Fabulous writing darling girl utterly fabulous

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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7 posted 2002-04-21 05:52 PM


~Happy Sunday Kacy, you're a joy to read.

And I do read you more times than I reply, it's usually a popping in for a short time to catch a few reads then oop, off again.
But know that you're on my 'must' list.

*Peace.

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