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Being Alone |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“BEING ALONE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Once I loved you dearly, perhaps I still do… Only now it’s different, something in me left of you… Hurtful things you’ve said, I don’t understand why… Gave you everything of me, this you can’t deny… Giving hearts are fragile, more sensitive than others… They hurt quicker than most, especially by the takers… Don’t know where it’s going, together, or not known… I do know I loved you dearly, I’m tired of being alone… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big huggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know just how you feel and I don't want to be alone either, I want to meet my Joanna so very very much and show her how much I love her and dream of forever making her happy! (smiles) I hope true love has found your heart, sweet friend, you deserve it so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-21-2002 01:07 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Durn Bill.....you put tears in my eyes... It does hurt... But it will hurt less.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - awww, how can you be alone when all of us here love you so?!! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Time...it takes time. Dang, do I know this feeling! Well said. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC Being alone is one of the "worst" feelings a person can experience. After a while, you get use to it, and the hurt gets burried deeper. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~ Bill~You aren't alone...you've got me ~  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is Utterly perfect writing, haven’t we all felt this at one time or another. This is truly special. And you’ll never be alone darling boy, you have me, you have, PIP’s and you have a poets soul. Truly outstanding writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes I actually am happy to be alone Bill..it's a mindset hugss M |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
BC, you've read my mind. . . but, then again, it seems that you always have my friend. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...I'm so sorry for your heartbreak. I've been there myself. This poem vividly captures the emotions felt when a special love is lost. Hope that your heart mends and brighter days are ahead for you. ***Ivy Rose |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh bill, I know just how you feel. I've been the giver for way too long. You always have your friends here at passions to lean on through good times and bad. (hugs) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice display of the feelings we have when we decide we don't want to be alone...James |
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