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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-04-21 11:30 AM



Each time we come together
a little more
I learn of you,
the swing of moods,
the change of looks,
each time your play
of mixture brews.

I think you are my cup of tea,
no sugar needed
to touch these lips.
Each winful smile
is quite enough
your mixture, mine,
in blended sips.

Each time it's you that offers me,
invites appeal,
in dark abode
calls my bid
submits to me
to haunt my dreams
in worded code.

How far away, yet closer still
I feel it more
the mix of sweet.
You stir in me
more than a breeze
my drink of choice
each night's retreat.

Someday I hope the "each of" comes
our feelings mixed
our memories, one.
Ambrosia, each,
we shall dessert,
from first to last  
'til coursings done.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-04-21 01:27 PM


   This is beautiful! My favorite part:
Each time it's you that offers me,
invites appeal,
in dark abode
calls my bid
submits to me
to haunt my dreams
in worded code.


D.Lester Young
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2 posted 2002-04-21 02:56 PM


You stir me with words so sweet that they will mix with the meaning of hoping you get the blend right that suits you so.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-04-21 04:45 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhh...I love how you closed the thoughts in this poem, sweet friend, there is a sweetness that fills these words of hope! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-04-26 06:52 AM


Midnitesun..thank you, I think those were my favorite lines *s


D.Lester Young, I will get the blending I deserve one day...thank you for the  visit and words *s
M

Noah, such a wonderful supportive poet you are..
thanks  and
many hugss
M



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