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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-04-21 11:25 AM



Within

How I long to feel your touch
in the early morning hour,
you fill me with your loving
teaching me of love's power.

Reaching deep you touch my soul
as you slowly heal my heart.
The special way you make love;
a true gift of finest art.

You awaken my senses
with your touches and sweet kiss
When your holding me closely
your holding me in sweet bliss.

I can feel your passion burn
as you feed the flame of fire.
You tremble me with your thoughts
as you fill me with desire.

Within your soul I am lost
and this world does not exist;
within your arms I am found
and your love I can't resist.




{On the wings of words our spirits fly...and our souls are free...me}


Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-21-2002 11:28 AM).]

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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2002-04-21 11:30 AM


Donna~

I have missed your words, and thoughts...its sooo good to see you back posting your heart...


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
a ocean of you,
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-21 12:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always find true happiness within his heart and be graced by a love bound to last forever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-21-2002 12:11 PM).]

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2002-04-21 12:22 PM


Within your soul I am lost
and this world does not exist;
within your arms I am found
and your love I can't resist.
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it dont get much better than this does it?
lovely rhymes divine Donna...your cadence is a full of harmony as your hearts sincerety.
so good to find your name here girlie!!

Larry C
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4 posted 2002-04-21 01:16 PM


Donna,
So that's where you've been! Welcome to reality. LOL Fabulous write.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-04-21 01:17 PM


Donna,
You know...if you'd send me that photo album I could select your picture and we could get it posted!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-04-21 01:21 PM


Been missing your lovely writing. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Marsha
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7 posted 2002-04-21 05:35 PM


Donna darling girl, this is utterly utterly wonderful, I love the imagery and the language in this. This reads so beautifully,. Absolutely wonderful use of language and vivid pictures I really do like this. Wonderful writing utterly wonderful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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8 posted 2002-04-22 03:37 PM


ah yes. . . I like the flow and feeling of this one GS. . . nice to see you back. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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