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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-04-21 10:27 AM



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Silver Sprays Galore (Word List Challenge )
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This was a challenge from another board using words
afar..emit..jingle...plum..saffron...tablet..meander
..rapid..galore..carpet, we had to use 8 out of the 10 words .... here was my poem below ....

Silver Sprays galore

The season was fall
Leaves carpet the floor
We meander the path
That leads to the shore

Rested along the way
By the old plum tree
Rapid flows the stream
Winding toward the sea

A sunset descending
The colour of saffron
Last glow of goodbye
Day soon shall be gone

Harbourside sounds
Chains and bells jingle
Waves lash the shore
The sea breezes tingle

Beside the lighthouse
Gazing over the shore
Stars shone from afar
In silver sprays galore


Hope ©2002

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ecrivan
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1 posted 2002-04-21 10:58 AM


Picturesque write, Australia beckons me sometimes, would be nice to travel across
well done


HopeS
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2 posted 2002-04-21 11:16 AM


Thanks for your kind reply ecrivan
yes I live only minutes from the ocean , it does inspire quite a lot
hope

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3 posted 2002-04-21 11:39 AM




(smiles) Oooooohhhh...I love this, sweet friend, I just love those kind of challenges so much, it always inspires me no matter what and then such a magical vision is made from the words! (kiss on cheek) Your words shine with silver and gold, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

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