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Rick
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0 posted 2002-04-21 08:45 AM



When my heart became the writer and each daily thought my pen
The passions, which my heart had lost, revealed themselves again

I found my lost convictions which were buried deep within
I discovered many changes and a new place to begin

I found the thoughts of hidden well consume the parchment white
I found relief consume my heart as more I came to write

I was freed of all my devils and the torments made of day
My heart is now the writer and my thoughts now pen away

© Copyright 2002 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2002-04-21 10:26 AM


Rick~

Yes exactly, always let your heart write!! its beautiful...


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Martie
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2 posted 2002-04-21 11:10 AM


Rick

"I found the thoughts of hidden well consume the parchment white
I found relief consume my heart as more I came to write"

For a poet, to write it down, completes.  Enjoyed your thoughts here.


Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-04-21 11:15 AM


Rick your absolutely right, when we leave the troubles of the day and write our hearts....wonderful..

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

{on the wings of words our spirits fly...and our souls are free....me.}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-21-2002 11:16 AM).]

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4 posted 2002-04-21 11:17 AM


You say this exactly perfectly, Rick. I feel the same. It's amazing how therapeutic writing is.
Sandra

Suetang
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5 posted 2002-04-21 09:10 PM


Hello Rick

It's as though you took the words right out of my mouth with this.  I'm sure each and every one of us can relate to this. I love reading your words of wisdom.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-04-21 09:46 PM


I found relief consume my heart as more I came to write

Rick - Exactly!! Good one. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Ivy Rose
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7 posted 2002-04-21 10:37 PM


Rick...Scrumptous poem!!!!!  Just love the way your words dance across the heart and bloom within the mind...***Ivy Rose
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