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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-04-21 03:09 AM

Volumes, I wrote
as another man
now, again
to prove myself

in reality.

You

are my first thought upon waking
are the crumpled, fading picture in my pocket through the day
are the dream I hold tightly at night

what else can I give you

but my love?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-04-21 03:34 AM

And this testimony of that.

Hand over heart sincerity here.

I applaud.

(May she hear ya, m'friend!)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-04-21 08:45 AM

are my first thought upon waking
===================================

you will already know why that line went thru me ...
and like me twin...I too am touched by the sincerety laced longing of your brevity.
heart-hugs going out to the porch

mothyme

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2002-04-21 10:21 AM

A Ferrari would be nice.....

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2002-04-21 10:54 AM

Good Sunday to you,

I'll pass on the Ferrari, how about a down payment on a home..just kidding...volumes are
being writing in my home with plenty of paper
all around so I can relate to this too

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-04-21 11:15 AM

Mm, I know this feeling well. You have so much love to give, Duncan, she's a lucky girl.
Sandra

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2002-04-21 11:21 AM

How about the new Lotus Elise??? I've got room in my garage!!! Lol

And what else could one ask for?
But a love that holds a dream
Held within the pockets
Of a comfy pair of jeans
So take it out, I’ll dream with you
And take it to the stars
And with you I’ll hold onto
A dream that can be ours

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (04-21-2002 11:24 AM).]

Alicia
Member

since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

7 posted 2002-04-21 11:33 AM

~What a lovely morning read! *Peace.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-04-21 12:05 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so sweet, dearest friend, I know she will forever be blessed by the love you offer her and she could never ask for anything more! (big hugggssssssss) Now what about that Ferrari? LOL! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2002-04-21 12:17 PM

everyone is talking cars here....I was thinkin more along the lines of a plane ticket to the porch

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-04-21 12:54 PM

I'm with JM...
Love to come and sit
upon that porch swing
for a spell.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2002-04-21 01:15 PM

I'm sitting here grinning at this one. Crumpled papers can withstand the tests of time and distance...just keep'em outta the washin machine.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2002-04-21 01:20 PM

Mmmmmm....sigh....smile. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

13 posted 2002-04-21 02:51 PM

Ducan,

I like

I always do though hehe.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

14 posted 2002-04-21 02:59 PM

Words in a crumbled picture growing stronger in time. Deep thoughts.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

15 posted 2002-04-21 04:17 PM

And who would not want that kind of love? One of my favorites.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

16 posted 2002-04-25 12:22 PM

for so many reasons, this touches me

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

17 posted 2002-04-25 01:14 PM

Very sweet.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

18 posted 2002-04-25 08:23 PM

nothing more than ones self should ever be needed. Very touching a well felt write.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2002-04-25 08:25 PM

Duncan, a powerfully loving poem...

Enjoyed the way you have written this..

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

20 posted 2002-04-25 09:07 PM

Brilliant and so specific. You really pinpoint the only truth. ThisDiamond

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

21 posted 2002-04-26 01:59 AM

Duncan~

'what else can I give you

but my love?'

All else pales in comparison to love~
Beautifully written~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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