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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-04-20 10:51 PM



Budding out beneath obstructions cinch
The falling has now passed, to spring of winters pinch
Wearing colors that will signify much more than hood
To stretch each tiny edge and greet the sun so warm and good

Budding up a reaching ridge to grasp the dawning rays
The thinking time as soaking shower gives way to brighter days
And sleep commence upon the fragrant air of nights sweet breeze
Another full and flowered spring to bloom of all of these

Budding to the full adult in shapes designed to thrive
For winters death facade returns the green in full alive
Umbrella to shade of the rising fire as summers come
Fully formed the leaves before you dance on sparkling sun

Copyright Kkh 4/20/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-04-20 10:58 PM


TD...let me get the umbrella,  ballcap and
sunscreen out before you write one of these
again.....  Could certainly feel the seasons
coming in...Mag...

Alicia
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2 posted 2002-04-20 11:18 PM


~I need this, need this. Will read it again and again. Wonderful decriptions, images and feeling, nice, so nice, and warm, thank you. This is so well constructed, especially loved your opening. *Peace.
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3 posted 2002-04-20 11:20 PM


TD,
Hallalejah!!! Spring is here...spring is here.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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4 posted 2002-04-20 11:21 PM






(smiles) YAY!!! The spring is my favorite season and the summer too is so very pleasnt to me, and I am hoping right now it can become even more magical to me when my Joanna might come out to visit me! (kiss on cheek) May all that Mother Nature left before you bless you this season in symphony, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-21 05:39 AM


AMEN! Very good one here! I love it!
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