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Remembering When
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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New leaves beneath the trees surrounded in the shade of seasons past remembering when~ The sun rose and set in your eyes hinting at the light that no longer gleams quite so brightly. As I lay on my back looking through the branches that have taken on a new spring giving way to a whole new meaning. Yet in the stillness of my thoughts I turn to the memory of you, reminded of the seeds we had planted in hopes to reap what we had sown, standing together to watch our garden grow. My thoughts wander back in time comforted by the feeling that perhaps a seedling has been swept across the miles and landed along side your walkway, and that your new love is flourishing in abundance. I hope that you might think of me like I remember you~ When the spring time blooms in a field of flowers where it all began... [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-20-2002 09:57 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
My thoughts wander back in time comforted by the feeling that perhaps a seedling has been swept across the miles Beautiful thoughts here, Lori... I have always wondered about things like that.  ~hugsLyra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - I'm not sure what words to say after reading this touching write. Wow, this is just so meaningful, just done with so much feeling... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I hope that you might think of me like I remember you~ When the spring time blooms in a field of flowers where it all began... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wow Lori! Now this one brought a tear of remember to my eyes. Very well done and much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Even if he never admits it to you...those thoughts will be there. What a candid write of love lost and replanted. Excellent job! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I hope that you might think of me like I remember you~ When the spring time blooms in a field of flowers where it all began..."  (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this too had me remembering so much, your words always reveal so much! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a powerful retrospective! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lori, this has the softness of Spring within it....and so very well said. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks~ Was saying what needed to be said in order to make my own peace~ Hindsight being 20/20 though I'm not sure it even mattered. I appreciate each and every one of you for leaving your kind words. |
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