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Open Poetry #20

Chicken soup for my cold

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-04-20 08:22 PM

With a bad cough
I awoke
feeling awful
and fatigued
Lost my appetite
and my sleep
Then my mother made me
chicken soup for my cold
The soothing liquid
warm my spirit
The sneezing continued
but I felt cure
My mother soft hand on my forehead
I was little again
I could never be more content
my mother made me chicken soup
for my cold

[This message has been edited by walker (04-20-2002 08:23 PM).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-04-20 09:20 PM

walker - I'm sorry you have a cold. You know what? That chicken soup sounds really good, got any extra?

BC

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2002-04-20 09:42 PM

walker,

I never could figure out which was better at the time, the chicken soup or mom's loving hand. I liked

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-20 11:07 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, that wa sos sweet of your mother to make such wonderful soup of you, sweet friend, I also have noticed that whenever I'm sick, if I put Tabasco in my soup, it burns so many germs I feel better within hours! (kiss on cheek) I hope you feel better now, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-04-20 11:22 PM

Glad to hear you're in good hands. Get well soon, walker. (And try not to sneeze on me, ok?)

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-04-20 11:49 PM

mmmmm chicken soup sounds good right about now. Take care of that cold (if u have one)

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2002-04-21 12:19 PM

mmm a nice plate of chicken soup with a matzo ball inside..does gice you that boost..so get well fast and keep up the nifty
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