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Streen
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0 posted 2002-04-20 08:06 PM



    O fragrant lady
         of the moonstars,
know this:
others find man's darkbright orbed
fate, from how
you breathe the planets
              
  And when bright children eyes
tossle feet across moonlit fields
drinking birth by birth of lune-ray
lune-night, others see

not what I
    
see in you
they see mere light;

o light, light is destitute
of the heart.

children eyes bright see light
and path by path can trample

but walk by walk they drink
and as others do not stop
to think, think on you.

O moonlighting dove,
          I could close

my eyes
and would not lack you.
I could still see sight by sight
your real power.

I am yet a child ere and now this day
my trampling feet drink in the fields
my hands clasp the moonlit swaying wheat
and wildly

O forever flower,

I stray  path by path
to drink your love,
(moon by lunar in)
my heart.

© Copyright 2002 Derek Benz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-20 09:17 PM


This one left me wanting to frolic in the moonlight, and soak up some warm moonbeams.
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2 posted 2002-04-20 09:25 PM


Very nice...James
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3 posted 2002-05-29 10:05 PM



Ah...the Moon Is Back...

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4 posted 2002-06-01 10:33 AM


like a song...

loved this..

K

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5 posted 2002-06-01 03:36 PM


"I am yet a child ere and now this day
my trampling feet drink in the fields
my hands clasp the moonlit swaying wheat
and wildly

O forever flower,

I stray  path by path
to drink your love,
(moon by lunar in)
my heart."




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, may you always soak up the moonbeams from the smiles your love will always give you! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Derek, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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6 posted 2002-06-01 03:41 PM


Very nice writing....I enjoyed!
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