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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-04-20 05:42 PM

Where My Heart Remains

My heart shall always remain with you
Forever I will love you true
Our souls and hearts will dance forever
Until our bodies can be together

You're everything to me, the first thing on my mind
Everytime we have to leave one another, I want to rewind time
Being with you is beyond any words I could say
Just know with you my heart is always

When the sun no longer shines, and the sky is no longer blue
I still will carry on, completely loving you
To hold you here in my arms, will leave me never to be the same
For it's with you my darling...that my heart will remain

I am filled with such sorrow
To think of our departing tomorrow
But I know the candle will never lose it's flame
For with you is where my heart will remain

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"
[This message has been edited by Aimster (04-20-2002 05:43 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-04-20 05:47 PM

Like this...the title is excellent...James

Stapelton
Junior Member

since 2002-04-16

Posts 13
Canada

2 posted 2002-04-20 05:47 PM

I enjoyed your poem, it was written straight from your heart.
thanks for sharing it.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-04-20 05:52 PM

Very nice writing. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-20 05:55 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo compassionately heartfelt, sweet friend, and may your true love forever kiss your tears of sorrow away and show you a place where your heart will always be treated peacefully! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-04-20 05:57 PM

Beautiful words of love, Aimster. Especially loved that last verse. ***Ivy Rose

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-04-20 05:58 PM

Amy darling lil sis of my heart again your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your heart positively sings in this, I love it utterly utterly. Sometimes I swear you write with starlight, this is one of those times

Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-04-20 05:59 PM

Aimster - I agree, this was written from your heart...

BC

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2002-04-20 09:49 PM

Amy,

Such sweet romance

I loved it.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

9 posted 2002-04-20 10:16 PM

Aim, (sigh) this is just beautifully written and it's clearly from that pure heart of yours. Carry that feeling when you part and it will guide you the rest of the way. Wonderful write, as always.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

10 posted 2002-04-21 01:23 AM

As always your words reach out far beyond the page, take care!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

11 posted 2002-04-21 07:22 PM

Amy lil sis / cousin / aunt, this is truly beautiful writing, how do you manager to clearly spill your true feeling before all. I’m awed by your writing skill and always impressed by it. YOU have a wonderful way of writing lil sis absolutely wonderful. So beautiful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2002-04-21 08:05 PM

I want to rewind time

now this is a line to inspire a write for me...thank you Amy

hugss
M

oh...loved the whole poem *s

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

13 posted 2002-04-22 08:30 AM

You're everything to me, the first thing on my mind
Everytime we have to leave one another, I want to rewind time
Being with you is beyond any words I could say
Just know with you my heart is always
=====================================

Love and devotion look good on ya Amy-girl...
your poetry is filled with the same harmony as your heart.
Beautiful, tender, sincere write.
heart-hugs
jm

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