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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-04-20 05:24 PM


Diamonds In The Rough

I have found
that my visions
of ~beauty~
are not defined
by that movie
star stuff.

I envision
~beauty~
more like
a diamond
in the
rough.

JamesLee
April20
2002



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1 posted 2002-04-20 05:38 PM


Awesome!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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2 posted 2002-04-20 05:48 PM


James darling boy this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is amazing. You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow is just perfect

Truly sensational writing, you never disappoint me, fabulous

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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3 posted 2002-04-20 06:01 PM




(smiles) Oh James, I couldn't agree with you more, while I do believe especially in Disney movies that wishing upon a star will ghuarantee your dreams can come true, I believe the real authentic beauty of life rests in suprises and in our hearts! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-21 12:15 PM



Bravo!  Well said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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5 posted 2002-04-21 12:46 PM


Exactly!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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6 posted 2002-04-21 01:39 PM


Me too. Thanks for honoring true beauty, unadorned, unadulterated, often underated.
ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-04-21 04:52 PM


I know something of this topic...
Your poem describes the truest of simplicity.
Wonderful. ThisDiamond

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8 posted 2002-04-21 06:46 PM


JM...perfect!

Too many look for that diamond to be polished
to a fine gem's quality...Yet,  a true
diamond is one that has learned, matured and
posesses so many qualities.

Suetang
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9 posted 2002-04-21 07:32 PM


Hello James

Your words spoke in volumes and there are so many truths in what you have written.  I for one agree.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Martie
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10 posted 2002-04-21 11:12 PM


There is only one beauty, and it comes from the eyes of the beholder.  Your poem is sweet and true.
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