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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-04-20 03:48 PM


The stars
No longer
Are in sight
And my eyes
No longer
Have the strength
To cry
And my heart
Numb to any feeling
For all I care
You're good as gone
You left me
Without a warning
But I knew
The day would
Be coming
When I'd have
To gather the
Strength
And move on
Yet it still
Came to me
As a surprise
Nothing prepared
Me for these words
That echo
Through time
And screech
Though my mind
I'm sorry sweetheart
Bur You're good as gone..

© Copyright 2002 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Eloise
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1 posted 2002-04-20 04:11 PM


This is a very sad piece.  Hugs to you.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-20 04:14 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristen, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, for you are a true angel and you deserve the greatest happiness always! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-20 04:19 PM


You and me both...sigh. I could relate.
J. K. Mitchell
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4 posted 2002-04-20 04:32 PM


You reached my heart with this one.
Excellent!

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

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just out of reach
5 posted 2002-04-20 05:57 PM


Well done!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2002-04-20 06:01 PM


Ceinwyn - sometimes it comes slowly when they are good as gone. Wish you well...

BC

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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7 posted 2002-04-20 06:03 PM


Ceinwyn...Powerful emotions simmering in your words.  Very poignant poem.

***Ivy Rose

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
8 posted 2002-04-20 10:41 PM


Painful poem, I understand.
Sandra

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displaced
9 posted 2002-04-21 05:44 AM


sad, and I do like the sad ones...very good
See me?
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10 posted 2002-04-21 06:02 AM


This is full of sad emotions, i can relate, good write all the same.
God Bless and be strong
Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

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