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tracie66
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0 posted 2002-04-20 01:32 AM



Poetry heart, poetry soul
to make the world brighter
my poetic goal,

sunny words
spread across the page,
rainbow of thoughts
today no rage,

mellifluous tones
from a poetic heart,
spreading her soul
with wings apart,

flying above
to sprinkle the world with joy,
my words of hope
I try to employ,

Imagining the colors
a rainbow brings,
then how you feel,
inside your heart sings,

poetry is the same
it makes us feel alive,
a rainbow of words,
in poetry I strive



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (04-20-2002 01:37 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-04-20 02:13 AM


Finally smiling again and you did it!

This was light and playful and sweet, and reading felt like "skipping". *made me smile*, y'did. Thanks!

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-04-20 02:23 AM


tracie,
Now that was a perfect presentation for a perfect rainbow of words. Awesome job. Those Aussies sure are talented folks! Thanks.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

tracie66
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3 posted 2002-04-20 02:33 AM


Dear Seren so glad I could make you feel that way ~HUGS~ sweetie

LarryC
Hi and thanks for such warm comments, I appreciate it very much ~HUGS~ from the poet girl downunder

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-04-20 12:10 PM


TRACIE IS BACK!!!!!

  Hey Girlie...welcome home

this is a wonderful entrance back to poetry land...Cool presentation...
cant wait to see more of your poetic colors!!

how about how good it feels to finally forgive you
   ~~~
the moment I jumped off of it ... was the moment I touched down.

~Alanis Morissette~

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5 posted 2002-04-20 01:39 PM




(smiles) Oooohhhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, your gorgeous heart shines with the colors of true love! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, always continue to spread the colors of your heart like you always do, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

J. K. Mitchell
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6 posted 2002-04-20 04:43 PM


A rainbow of words...I like the theme.
Good write!

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-04-20 06:19 PM


tracie66 - word of a song you write. Well done...

BC

Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2002-04-20 06:23 PM


VERY WELL EXPRESSED,tracie66!!!  Couldn't have written a better description of a true poet.   ***Ivy Rose
Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2002-04-20 09:04 PM


I like this kind of rainbow very much!
EagleOne
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10 posted 2002-04-21 01:33 AM


"Poetry heart, poetry soul
to make the world brighter
my poetic goal,"

Well ya know you do! Good to read you again!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2002-04-21 11:35 AM


So good to see you back Tracie, and what a beautiful way to re-enter our happy passions home.  Hugs to you poetess dear.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


Sven
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12 posted 2002-04-22 03:53 PM


Hi Tracie!!!  

ah, it's good to read your work again my friend. . . I've missed it very much. . .

and is it any wonder why??

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

tracie66
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13 posted 2002-05-06 09:53 AM


I'm sorry I've taken so long to return replies and sorry I can't reply to each of you individually but please know that I do care and thank all of you from the bottom of my heart for your wonderful and warm replies to this poem of mine...thanks a million
~HUGS~ to all
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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