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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2002-04-19 12:48 PM

Our love did not begin with the Sun's first rise,
Nor did it start at the Sun's last set.
It happened when another body filled the skies,
When two poetic-crossed souls finally met.
We did not know it was love just yet,
But, we knew we had to take that chance.
And so began this lover's vingette
In the Moonlit Dawn of our Romance.

It all began with a glance from the eyes.
A first line spoken in this Romantic Duet
Gave way to another, and another in reply.
What exactly was said, I sometimes forget;
But, I know it was echoed by a blue clarinet.
As I took your hand for our first dance,
We moved in time with that quiet quartet
In the Moonlit Dawn of our Romance.

Then came the sound of love's first sigh
As the floor became awash in violet.
The moon appeared brightly on high
Like a diamond drop so softly inset
Into the sky like a crystal amulet.
Lighting and crossing the sky's wide expanse,
Leaving only traces of our silhouettes
In the Moonlit Dawn of our Romance.

This is the love that Night beget,
When hearts fall under Love's sweet entrance.
I, your Romeo; and you, my Juliet
In the Moonlit Dawn of our Romance.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-04-19 12:53 PM

MR~

so gentle a profound statement....in awe of these words....in all their softness...thank you...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-19 02:43 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! (sigh) May you always hold your Juliet close to your heart and share true loves happiness forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-04-19 02:47 PM

Gorgeous, beautifully penned

~Victoria

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

4 posted 2002-04-19 03:30 PM

Wow...superbly romantic, words can't describe the beauty.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

5 posted 2002-04-19 05:18 PM

Well then. I wanted you to know I hadn't missed the works you posted earlier than this. So this is how it all began?

Sounds like a wonderful beginning. Your heart is sweet in this.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by Siofra (04-19-2002 05:18 PM).]

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

6 posted 2002-04-20 12:57 PM

tsk tsk..
this shouldn't be at the bottom.

Give it another round, Love?

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

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