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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-04-19 11:45 AM

As I read on, I had no idea there were “Stolen Moments”   his words, Stolen Moments we shared. I did not know how to respond: So I just read--(from the NoteBook)

"I’d rather feel you
combing my hair with
your fingers
feeding me Greek black olives"

"Or maybe what ever
we find in the refrigerator"

"We laughed about
the brown pinto
after waxing it
the 8 track still works
turn it up"
(I hear the laughter)

"I ache for you
when you aren’t around,
when you aren’t singing
Faith Hill in my ears
you know, the love stuff
I only admit this to you”

“A vision of loveliness
in my Yankees cap
and denim shirt
to me, you are
the way your
hair falls, softly framing
your face, and caressing
your shoulders, if I could
paint,           even draw--
I have it framed in my mind,
and heart     - you
more then a lover      -I
laying beside you
watching you breathe

“To awake in morning
dawn wrapped in you”

Just to hear you
say

you love me" (FH)

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-19-2002 11:48 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-04-19 11:48 AM

wow.... this one I am saving.... spoke to me for several reasons and left me remembering more than I should have....

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-04-19 11:53 AM

Lauren,
Memories worth recording and recalling. Sweet write!

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

3 posted 2002-04-19 12:06 PM

Your heart is an open book in this one, Lauren...all I could think of what a lucky guy he is and I hope he knows it.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-19 12:06 PM

“A vision of loveliness
in my Yankees cap
and denim shirt
to me, you are
the way your
hair falls, softly framing
your face, and caressing
your shoulders, if I could
paint,           even draw--
I have it framed in my mind,
and heart     - you
more then a lover      -I
laying beside you
watching you breathe"

(smiles) And I did think of Faith Hill's "Breathe" reading this, this is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) May you always share such lovely moments like these with your love and breathe forever in rapture, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-04-19 12:24 PM

Ron~

I am probably sharing far too much, but as of lately its the only way....I appreciate your thoughts, I hope the remembering wasnt painful....

~~

Larry~

its my way of dealing with life right now....thanks friend...

~~

Opeth~

sadly, the statement you made is far from the truth, I am learning....thank you for making me smile...

~~

Noah~

I too heard the same song, I so APPRECIATE you...

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-19-2002 12:25 PM).]

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

6 posted 2002-04-19 01:39 PM

If would seem that we had the same idea.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-04-19 02:02 PM

Oh Lauren this is..this is...captivating..
I felt almost intrusive..quietly listening...
this spoke to me of many stolen moments which haunt my own thoughts.
Beautiful! ~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2002-04-19 02:53 PM

Lovely Lauren..beautifully done as always hugs

~Victoria

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2002-04-19 03:56 PM

you listen to the quiet very well my friend. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-04-19 04:01 PM

Oh yes sweet moments of sharing...James

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2002-04-19 07:43 PM

I have never seen myself in the shoes of a theif, until now.
Such thoughts are a gem, .... precious in all forms.
Keep the "Faith". Talk soon!!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-04-20 11:03 PM

Wow, I this lots. Good work.
Sandra

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2002-04-21 11:39 AM

I knew when I stole a moment to get back in here and I searched your words out I would find something lovely and soothing, but I didn't know I would find such a treasure dear friend....I felt every word of this and in silence sent you a hug and a wish for peace. Miss you dear friend. Hugs.
~D~

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

14 posted 2002-04-21 12:17 PM

Green Eyes:
i got into the moment with you on this, daydreaming to the point you even
inspired a poem about pulling out some stolen moments. Perhaps i will
post it soon, making sure you get the credit for the inspiration.

Name your own superlative for this wonderful poem you wrote!
JkF

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

15 posted 2002-04-21 09:07 PM

I think you've seen through my eyes, but far more than my own saw...I'm thankful I saw through yours...

jwesley

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

16 posted 2002-04-21 10:09 PM

Wonderful...thoroughly enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

17 posted 2002-04-22 10:59 PM

Thanks to all....and thank you for letting me "vent" whether in a happy mood, or not, I am most appreciative of the support and friends I have found among these pages....

Love to all...

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
a ocean of you,
what if told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-22-2002 11:00 PM).]

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

18 posted 2002-04-25 10:48 PM

Lauren -
as usual, this is truly captivating and beautiful. i am sad to see you having such trouble, though. we're all here for you if you need us (i am sure i speak for everyone here.)
-Dave

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

19 posted 2002-04-28 11:21 AM

Dave~

Thank you my friend, for your tender thoughts....appreciate them..

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

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