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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it could have been our yacht there the dragon boat with gold letters and a bow that made smile shapes in the green mouth of our sea we were alone except for the captain and his mate and they were alone too in each other's eyes she touched his gray beard with her smile he touched her tan that was hidden there under the sun with noon lights on they smiled hello and good-bye then when we departed with no bags and a month to spend under the trees and nothing else to cover our sin except maybe night sometimes if we slept through into the day by accident or too much love the nights and days before ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and a month to spend under the trees and nothing else to cover our sin except maybe night sometimes if we slept through into the day by accident or too much love the nights and days before Now THAT'S what I need. You just wrote a bit of heaven. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It must be Friday two early morning treats Coffee and Poetry what could be better  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and a month to spend under the trees and nothing else to cover our sin except maybe night sometimes if we slept through into the day by accident or too much love the nights and days before ================================= where can I book a criuse?  Love the imagery in this DS ... and the undercurrent ... skin tides *S* very very cool poet sir... your poetry is like morning brew...always stimulating and steamy  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serenity, welcome to my world enjoy it with your eyes.. thank you so much sunshine good morning again.. a pleasure to share your eyes with the scent of java thank you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
janet marie you are such enjoyment to have come by in those steamy mornings too thank you for your touches |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
is there ever too much..if it's really true?...some evocative stuff, well put  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The moment we think there is too much, Ecrivan...it's time to think again |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ecrivan.. for only a moment sometimes til we gasp our panting still and regain the second wind thank you for the read |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, there is nothing like kicking off the morning with reading your gorgeous sentiments in your words! (big hugggsssss) You always amaze me, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
You know...I usually check to see how things are going in PiP on a regular basis and everyday lately, I smile just to see your name, before I've even read anything, because I know I am in for some really good candy in your poetry. I really love the dark sweetness of your muse. Tell me where to find this place. I could use a respite. Patience is the ability to idle your motor, when you feel like stripping your gears. Author Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I smile before I even read each morning... Thank you...your posts are an experience Dark. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
DS~ Well that was a nice little ray of light cast into my heart! Too much love, psh...there's no such thing! I'll take all that I can get!  Thanks for giving my heart a little squeeze this morning *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dark~ Is the Captain still around?? indeed look at you, giving all readers a gimpse of early morning.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah...thank you my friend..so much PhaChi..I hear you can see this place sometimes between just down wind from Love Bay on the south shore there... might be Lake Couer D Alene on a summer evening too..Thanks for the walk by Enchantress...you bless me with your daily touches lady fair, thank you SmittyKitty...never too much love....but too much loving for a moment maybe? maybe a break avery 4 or 5 hours is ok? wink Lauren, spank you very much...can you see that boat coming in ...there..thank you babe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...a lot...James |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I do love Lake Couer D'Alene. That must be the place. Patience is the ability to idle your motor, when you feel like stripping your gears. Author Unknown |
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