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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-04-18 05:54 PM


“THIS CRAZY GUITAR”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When I play these chords,
thoughts enter inside me…
Close my eyes, a vision forms,
your face is what I see…

No matter what I try to do,
or the music I play or hear…
I can’t really help myself,
in my mind you appear…

Heartbeats, of softer rain,
everything of you I want…
Not these hurting memories
in my being, to haunt…

This crazy guitar of mine,
sings of new beginnings…
Lonely past is gone within,
today new awakenings…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-18 05:56 PM


Nicely done BC....sounds much more positive
than some.....

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2 posted 2002-04-18 05:57 PM


Soon you will play a new song...on that crazy guitar...James
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3 posted 2002-04-18 05:57 PM


Bill~

Strum softly....but keep strumming, its beautiful...


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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4 posted 2002-04-18 05:59 PM




YAY!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Oh Bill, I'm so happy to see you again, I've missed reading your words so much and have missed you since I got to talk on the telephone with you earlier this month! (smiles) Yes, continue to play those blues always and let rock and roll fill your heart and make magic and hope sweep those chords you play so well! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-18-2002 06:00 PM).]

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5 posted 2002-04-18 06:29 PM


Bill darling boy this is utterly wonderful writing, the sheer beauty of these words caress my soul with delight. Your writing is always divinely painted in brilliant hues of crystal truths. I love it, I really do. The writing is as always perfect.

Welcome home again, will you stay for longer this time, your writing is always missed, and so are you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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6 posted 2002-04-18 08:45 PM


This crazy guitar of mine,
sings of new beginnings…
Lonely past is gone within,
today new awakenings…

Good for you!! Leave the past where it belongs - in the past. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-04-18 08:50 PM


Love this one Bill.
Love the sound of a guitar....
You should live closer and jam with my son.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2002-04-19 09:26 AM


I like this very much, Bill... I can't play the guitar... but how I do love to listen! *S*
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9 posted 2002-04-19 04:10 PM


mind if I take a front row seat BC??

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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