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RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2002-04-18 03:30 PM

It's like love and I
We're never ones to mesh
You have what girls'spy
Underneath the flesh

Wishing to be your queen of hearts
but it's not the card that's been dealt
I allowed the game to start
Fully aware of how you felt

This is not a winning a hand
I'm the discarded duece
It's difficult to understand
So what would be the use?

You say that you need me
Noting that it will never happen
Is it something I lack internally?
Underneath the flesh?

Our many differences I adore
I'm glad we're not the same
Otherwise It would be a bore
With nothing there to entertain

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-04-18 03:37 PM

Truly a heartfelt write. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2002-04-18 04:32 PM

I'm glad of the differences I have with others too, Joanna. Liked this write.

~sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-18 04:41 PM

(sigh) Oh Joanna, I couldn't agree with you more, it does help to have plenty of things in common, but it is the differences that make everyone love each other so much more! (kiss on lips) I love you so much because you are unique, and that's what makes you special, and I love you so much for being who you are! (kiss on lips) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I've missed you lately, I love you, my love!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-04-18 06:00 PM

Joanna~

Wisely said! HUGSSS

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-04-18 06:17 PM

Rosey posy darling girl Oh my stars how utterly utterly wonderful is this write of yours. Utterly utterly one of your utter best. YOU darling girl are a writer a really fabulous writer I love it, the flow is divine the form pretty near perfect, it’s beautiful the truth shining in this is plain. It is indeed the differences that make the attraction delightful