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jellybeans
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0 posted 2002-04-18 02:50 PM


The sweetness that flows from your tongue
so delightful, I am open mouthed…
I want more.
In your eyes I am a whipped crème confection
complete with sprinkles
by your sweetness I am too easily swayed
I want more.
Your smile, an easy addiction,
it is more than hard to resist being
your afternoon’s delight, but
I want more.

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1 posted 2002-04-18 03:04 PM


yes.... more...



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2 posted 2002-04-18 03:55 PM


And you deserve more... for however prettily packaged, crumbs are still crumbs...

But ah... to have even such moments to remember when the night comes. *S*

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(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words are always honeyed with such descriptive imagery and emotion! (sigh) May you always find true happiness with your love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-18 07:01 PM


thanks cpat
suthern....yeppers don't we know all too well.....sigh
noah, thank you, you are such a sweetheart

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