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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2002-04-18 02:31 PM


Window Thoughts

I shall take
your lines,
stains of ink on parched thought


multi-fold them


bend them this way
then fold here...


then I shall take
delight in
unfolding them,


holding now sharp
corners up to the
window


letting light seep through

your deepest thoughts

while you watch from over there
as I let light seep through
this sheerest veil


and I may have to wet
my fingertip


just so


with just this


so that a fingerprint of me
remains

on your tip
of mind

your tongue
has already tasted
my salt


in the wounds still bleeding


and when I turn
I shall fold into you,
for the light of the window
let me seep to where
I want to be


© Copyright 2002 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-04-18 02:39 PM


perhaps the panes are showing....

nicely done my friend...

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2002-04-18 03:04 PM


Dear Decca....you are bending the light...and it resonates off us like summer's sun...I'm tanner already...
or perhaps singed

very very nice...............  *sigh* *whew*

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-04-18 03:15 PM




(smiles) I love this, sweet friend, I too can envision me sitting in my living room watching light shine through the sunroof and reflect on, this is wonderful! (sigh) May you always enfold into lifes sweetest pleasures, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie
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4 posted 2002-04-18 03:21 PM


Deca

So delicate, yet tantalizing.  Wonderfully done!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
5 posted 2002-04-18 04:08 PM


can see the sun through your veil
as you dance there
making finger prints on the glass

smiling wicked at the window washer
that waits to go again..

flirty and fun with sensual  nice work

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-04-18 04:30 PM


My oh my Deca!!  You are simmering girlie!
WOW!  At a loss for words here....
I'm keeping this!
~Hugs~

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