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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Painted here As if tattooed by your touch Lie the lines you wrote on my skin In a language older than Babylon or Mur incanted with some magic older still That they change color as well as shape with each glance Leaving no way to decipher the meaning That ever changes with each shift of the time You trapped here in cunning To drive mad the mind Perhaps opening the heart Does no one see these tomes written In ink that bleeds your essence with slow spread Until it drips from pages of us to stain The deeper lie of thought The fathomless depths of if Painted here For all to read meaning into as they With wise eyes or old hearts read What I can’t |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You mean to say the tattoo is not real? but Sir... it's there.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Does no one see these tomes written In ink that bleeds your essence with slow spread Until it drips from pages of us to stain The deeper lie of thought The fathomless depths of if ==================================== Oh my....this is deep...this is depth defined...written on soul parchment..aged with the slow ache of intense need. I honestly dont have the words to tell you how that verse effects me. Keeping this one for future stirrings. Capt...thy muse is divine.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*library* always forget to hit the darn box  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I feel the intensity in this, Ron...it ticks like explosive feeling, just waiting for someone to push the button. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Yes, I know this kind of feeling so very much too, sweet friend, there is so much that is recorded within history that seems so inconceivable to decipher and under rug swept, and only in discovering the lie or truth of it all can we understand the gist of it! (big huggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am completely blown away by this. Damn. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow.....me too......flying away with serentity by the power of this.....wow |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
That they change color as well as shape with each glance Leaving no way to decipher the meaning That ever changes with each shift of the time Right before your eyes...know exactly what you mean. Damn, you're on a roll. |
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