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The Notebook-Quiet Reflection
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The Notebook-Quiet Reflection |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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In a quiet reflection while I was reading pages of you & I, you touched softly my cheek, brushing your lips to mine silent room, a moment, filled with tears, my eyes love, simple in form ~~~~~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-18-2002 12:53 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, True to form...your writing always touches my heart. So very well done.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ How could one not be drawn in by the title ? And the pages are delicately flipped revealing such beautiful thoughts~ You are such a wonderful lady of sharing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
This...is wonderful. Thank you for Sharing... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so much said...(and felt)in so few perfectly whispered sighs...beautiful poetess L...have missed your soft offerings.  how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and have these pages blushing with laughter and thought! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
simply Lauren. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - and love in it's simplest form is the best of all. BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
wonderfully simple and a touch sentimental, no? with the notebook image in mind as you try to transcribe romantic senses, nice! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Simply passionately beautiful! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
silent room, a moment, filled with tears, my eyes love, simple in form This is simply beautiful, Lauren ~many simple hugs~  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautifully done, Lauren. All writing comes |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The softest of whispers, the loudest of tears ... ... silent only to those unknown. These such tears seem flavored sweet. It is truly good to read you once more. |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
beautiful, and heartfelt!!!!! Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A reflection as gentle as a whisper.... beaufully expressed Lauren. ~Hugs~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ Thank you, I appreciate your thoughts and kindness always... ~~ Marge~ thank you my friend, I am reliving a happier time....  ~~ Soleil Noir~ Thanks for stopping by, I enjoyed your thoughts... ~~ Janet Marie~ I have a world of notebooks to read and write, thank you for always being there to view.... ~~ Chris~ thanks much! ~~ Noah~ thank you sweet noah....for your comments of kind.... ~~ Sven~ simply thank you... ~~ Bill~ it is that simple sometimes isnt it....thank you for reading.... ~~ Martin~ Just a touch, sometimes thats all we need right? I've been reading too much lately....thanks... ~~ Lyra~ GOOD to see you here.....enjoyed your words, much.... Lone Wolf~ THANKS! ~~ Craig~ I missed seeing you, so glad you are back.... ~~ Keith~ very heart felt, thank you...I love your quote too....NICE ~~ Nancy~ thank you for stopping by, I always smile when I see your name...HUGSSSS HUGSSS and Love to all..... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
 *BUMP* |
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