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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Liquid Sunshine ~*Marge Tindal~ She poured like liquid sunshine pelted in warmth across my face Showering the all of me with her moisturizing grace~ Pittering the patter of endless chatter Droplets fresh upon my skin As I beheld her rainbow I was richly blessed again~ For in the liquidity of her rising I've come to know a new friend~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart and keeper of my souls song, as always you write with such skill and beauty I really found this excellent poem wonderful. The beauty of your words uplift a soul and this delightful confection illumes the page and your heart. Well done darling heart, exquisite writing. This poem contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the flow is utterly utterly divine, and I love it I truly do. Oh how I wish I could write like this, I can hear your heart and soul lifting onto angels wings, this is seriously good. Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful. And pretty darling heart very very pretty. You are such a good writer Love and warm stuff As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge dear friend, this is a lovely write of a great friendship you share....thanks for sharing this...  Lauren~ Step through the |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Love it, back monday. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ To see your glow is to let me know your radiant smile~ OhMarshaLove~ It should come as no surprise to you ... she's a real special new friend~ Thank you doll for the utterly precious, precious comments~  GreenEyes~ Thank you dear ... it's so wonderful to make new friendships~ Seymour~ God-speed~ Have a wonderful time~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Hope your new friend will be a friend forever! Betty Lou Hebert |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Meeting a new friend is one of the most fun experiences in the world. I loved this, Marge.  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marge - What a blessing making new friends is...enjoyed this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Back to the top with this one Marge. I love this! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Margie~girl When I read your poetry I know I have truly missed this place  This oozes warmth, color and you, well penned dear Margie ~HUGS~ always Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl MY FAVOURITE aunt of wonderful talent, this is as mum says very special. Of course it is since you wrote it, and you surely shine. Perfect poetry written by my favourite person. I really do love this one Softly gently touching the soul Friendship comes calling Whispering to that place of Heart where remembered song Sings quietly Trust that commodity Much treasured but Seldom found Blooms amid Star dreams of Hopeful joy That’s found in Perfect FRIENDSHIP Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, you always have such awesome poetry! I so enjoy reading yours, and are always so uplifting. You have something there within you beyond creative! Cool title also. I hope all is well with you. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, I think you are all WET!  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, theres nothing like sunshine to bring a smile. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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