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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-04-18 10:29 AM


Golden voice

"The angel went to her and said, "Greetings, you who are highly favored! The Lord is with you."
NIV Luke 1:28

Life can be so cold and narrow
For a lonely broken sparrow
For the sky calls come to me
Come fly over land and sea.

But it is so hard to sing
With a wobbly broken wing
O God please hear my prayer
Mend my wings and take me there.

To the stars where angels sing
Let me soar as new bells ring
And hold their hands as we rejoice
With new wings in golden voice.

Golden voice.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
April 18, 2002

((Amy))
-newell

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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-04-18 10:35 AM


Newell darling boy, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. You are an absolutely fabulous writer I love the way you’ve constructed this it’s clearly built of love and founded in the bedrock of compassion. I love the flow the wonder and the voice within. And yes I love it utterly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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2 posted 2002-04-18 11:07 AM




YES!!! Oh Newell, this is beautiful, actually, my name is Singing Sparrow on other poetry boards, for I am deeply touched by the sparrow and I believe God will always feed all His little sparrows with loving care! (big huggsssss) Ths is breathtaking, sweet friend, I know Amy will love this, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Aimster
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3 posted 2002-04-18 02:17 PM


newell~

this was a beautiful poem...i am so flattered
that I inspired you to write something of
this mangitude! you have a brilliant way of
expressing sometimes difficult emotions,
very powerful emotive write!!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-04-18 09:18 PM


Thank you, Marsha. Your words are honey to my soul. What more can I say than that I am elevated to the stars when you comment on my poems. When you comment, you are an angel from on high pulling me up to where you are.

((Marsha))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-04-18 09:19 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts.

((Noah))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-04-18 09:22 PM


And inspire me you did, Amy. And it was a deep honor for me to respond to your deep love and compassion expressed in your poem. And as our spirits fused within your words, I felt a deep compulsion to share my love and your pain. God bless you, Amy.

((Amy))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-18-2002 09:24 PM).]

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