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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-04-18 08:34 AM






You're The One
By: Noah Eaton
4/17/02

Because of you
I want to learn how to dance
How I want you
I only wish I could hold you and dance
No one will go with me to the Prom
You're the only girl who's ever felt for me
And if I asked you to dance
Would you take my hand happily?

Because of you
I have learned to cry with happiness
It is true
I only pray soon I can kiss those sweet lips
That you wear with a smile
Where all my dreams are preserved
And where your heart beats
Is where I'll find them reserved

I love you more than anything in the world
You're the only girl I've ever loved
You're the one I'm always dreaming of
I need you more than anything in the world
I finally feel I belong
And I will hold on as long as I have your love

It seems even after only five minutes
After you leave I already miss you
I know
It's all because I so much love you
You're like that teddy bear I could never give away
I need you more than anything
There's nothing like your emerald eyes
That brighten my world when I feel sad

I love you more than anything in the world
You're the only girl I've ever loved
You're the one I'm always dreaming of
I need you more than anything in the world
I finally feel I belong
And I will hold on as long as I have your love

Every night I pray beside my window
That you and me will go the distance and meet this summer
If I can just make this dream come true
If I can just make you happy and see our love shimmer
Oh God, please, I've never asked of anything more
If I could love you and make a happy story with a happy ending last forever
I have to have you, I feel if I can't I have blown my chance
To hold such an angel forever...

I love you more than anything in the world
You're the only girl I've ever loved
You're the one I'm always dreaming of
I need you more than anything in the world
I finally feel I belong
And I will hold on as long as I have your love
I love you more than anything in the world
You're the one I'm always dreaming of
I need you more than anything in the world
I finally feel I belong
And I will hold on as long as I have your love
You're the one I need...
You're the one I need...
You're the one I need...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-18-2002 06:52 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-18 08:50 AM


very sadly sweet my friend.... sincere and touching... I wish for you the best..


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2 posted 2002-04-18 08:57 AM


And if I asked you to dance
Would you take my hand happily?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ah sweet Noah, you know she would!
Where has your Joanna been all week?
She has been missed...and not just be me I assume.
Lovely poem Noah.
~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-04-18 12:28 PM


Noah~

BIG HUGSSS~  I know the ache of missing someone.... lovely, lovely words....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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4 posted 2002-04-18 01:50 PM


This sounds like it would be great set to music. Very sweet, Noah, and I wish you and Joanna the best!

~sky

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just out of reach
5 posted 2002-04-18 02:01 PM


Noah, your love for Joanna is honest and true. She is one lucky lady. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-04-18 03:33 PM


I like this very much, M'toe... especially the first verse. *S* So many times, people think they can change a partner... and that's almost always a mistake. But it's another thing altogether to want to change for someone... to let someone inspire us to greater heights than we'd ever find on our own. *S* This has a sweet sadness to it... and an abundance of love. *S*
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7 posted 2002-04-18 05:22 PM


Yes relationships are about where you will be six months from now or a year from now...will you grow closer or drift apart...James
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8 posted 2002-04-18 06:47 PM


Noah - very sweet and very touching write from your special heart. I'm sure she will take your hand...

BC

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9 posted 2002-04-18 07:03 PM


To be able to put your feelings into words is a precious gift.Both the giver and reciever is truly blessed.Peace and love my friend.

paladin

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10 posted 2002-04-19 01:22 AM


This one must have been influenced by shakira's song "The One"!!!!
Very beautiful Noah, and you know I would always dance the night away with you.
I might also talk your ear off, lol.
(hugs)

Sorry I haven't been around all week, been busy at work.

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