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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you climbed down tree of man limbs to underside of eden places you touched the serpent with silking and gave photos of your woman dreams I swam with you in slick water you were a volcano poem written dormant I knew the edges of your lava tubes and hesitated at their openings my words whispered to your secret buttons you blessed my mouth and hands with eruptions from heated places I was vertigo in your mind ear then we were enlace of sigh and song we melted water with fire chanting I leaned your shadow wall rooms you danced against the unknown of me and between the days, god created our dark combine ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and between the days, god created our dark combine DAMN. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my words whispered to your secret buttons you blessed my mouth and hands with eruptions from heated places I was vertigo in your mind ear then we were enlace of sigh and song we melted water with fire chanting I leaned your shadow wall rooms you danced against the unknown of me and between the days, god created our dark combine ========================================= OH YEAH .... DAMN covers it..... so does Have Mercy. One needs sunglasses to read this in the dark.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
does that mean it is ok? thank you ms (wink) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Janet Marie...you are sweet..and cute with the comments have some new KD's you can wear if you want..thank you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
This one ceratinly smolders on the page..and thne in the readers mind... as usual..I enjoyed the read and your talent. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When you speak to a poet's mind, quote:this becomes the most sensuous line of the poem... do us a favor never stop writing... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, yes, NEVER STOP WRITING!!! (big hugggssssss) Your words are always so delightful to read, sweet friend, every morning when I see your name on the screen I always smile instantly and only does my smile widen reading your work always! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sunshine is sooo right Dark. Never stop writing... and we will never stop reading. Gawd! This is sooo WOW! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ Again you captivate me within your phrasing~ Are you published ? And if not ... why not ? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat, thank you for your support my friend Sunshine thank you for the morning that you bring.. Noah you bless my words with your smile touches thank you Enchanting one...slow hugs to your thought places, thank you Marge, published underground some..and only in the books of the reader mind..thank you gracious lady for your words |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Publish, man, Publish.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS As usual your words power a feeling so well. Enjoyed! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine.. thank you .. Martie, thank you lady from down the road...I enjoy it when you walk by in the mornings... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hmmm..yes..very damn. Feels like the right word for sure..I believe we are chanting here..tell you something? You are fabulous. Sincerely, Regina |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina, glad you liked this..felt part of it, or just wanted to say damn... I appreciate your eyes...thank you |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I leaned your shadow wall rooms you danced against the unknown of me" the word Id like to use I cant, well not in this forum.... you know?, it often spills from my lips when reading your words....Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-18-2002 01:08 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness....this makes my head swim, and I have to go back and read it again!! Wonderful. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Yeah!!! What everybody else said!!! Patience is the ability to idle your motor, when you feel like stripping your gears. Author Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Greeneyes, was the word saliva? you are sweet babe..come whisper it to me.. Nightshade, thank you for your touch, I appreciate you much. PhaChi' lol, thank you for the ditto, I enjoy your wiggles on the reply keys |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Holy Moley and Jiminy Christmas!!! LOL I think I needed fire retardant eyeballs to read this one... but it's more than worth the smell of singe. *S* "Excellent!" doesn't even begin to do it justice. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lol... you bless me with laugh places thank you for the friendship in reply |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'we were enlace of sigh and song we melted water with fire chanting I leaned your shadow wall rooms you danced against the unknown of me' An awesome read tonight, DS...your imagery is quite impressive...great write! sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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