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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-04-18 07:11 AM


Inside it’s a confusion
Of voices,
Mixture of wild emotions
Shouting in hopes to be known
Their choices,
Never leaving me alone
Voices that give no reprieve,
Always there
Why won’t they ever just leave
And give me blissful quiet,
Don’t they care,
I could really use a respite
Of voices.

Gloom
So write "of voice"
I will be interested and pleased to see what you do with it.
”Lady in White
Now your turn, Lady, write “Quiet Voices”


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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-04-18 07:35 AM


The voices
in a monotone
they will not
let me alone...
voices
argue
to be led...
voices
argue
in my head.

Voices
sing a harmony...
One voice
of
dichotomy...

voices murmering
the past...
voices
future
in repast.

too many I know
speak at once...
voices, voices
of the sun...


Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2002-04-18 07:56 AM


The voices and I have consulted
We’ve decided we’re not schizophrenic
But you might me

Thanks for the response, Serenity
Nice to see you again

Gloom

Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-04-18 08:20 AM


nicely met Gloom... enjoyed this and will be interested to see how the lady responds to your challenge...

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