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Adventures of Ian
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Adventures of Ian |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Adventures of Ian Ian didn't know if he would ever have another chance to meet such a sexy chick that had managed to click with him so amazingly quick. He knew this was the last dance of the evening and he would soon lose his chance to ask if he could see her after the dance. After all a seventeen year old boy wasn't fully aware of all the tricks..he only knew that this exciting evening was passing way too quick. And although a young man of seventeen may define sexy in less thorough terms than say a man of twenty seven it was definately Ian's time to uncover those secret things that young men of his age yearn to discover. Yes if he had any hope at all to see her at least one more time he knew he had to lay the thoughts from his heart right on the line. Fortunately for him that last dance was nice and slow and he took every opportunity a young man could possibly know to whisper sweet nothings in her tender ear that no other dancers could hope to hear above the noise of the band playing so loud and near. No one except for that sweet sexy seventeen year old girl that seemed to bring new thoughts of the meaning of life into Ian's orderly world. Yet he found he couldn't possibly control his joyful refrain after he heard the beautiful words she said right after she would so sweetly coo his name. "Ian I wanted to tell you I've had so much fun and so before this last dance is done I offer my number and I sure hope you call for without you I have no one at all." It seemed like it had taken Ian awhile but finally he had found a new reason to smile. JamesLee April18 2002 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
vivid creation enjoyed the open blinds |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I just love story poems.... nicely done james.... enjoyed the peek inside... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this wonderful story with a happy ending, sweet friend, I am so happy he found such a special friend and I hope to see more chapters where their friendship grows and love is found! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ Ahhhhhh, those sweet nothings will do it EVERYTIME~ Delightful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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