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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-04-18 01:01 AM

We all hope for a moment in time when our thoughts could be heard by the winds of time in the beauty of God’s light shining upon us in his special blessing.

Fireworks exploding within my mind
Creating rainbows of dazzling strength
Saturating the heavens within in delight
An awakening has appeared

The crown is yours to wear in might
Of words spoken within sparkling gems
That captivates a listening ear
Wanting so much more to hear

The world is yours in the power of one
Making so much sense
That no one fears you
And blesses you for your insight

In the magic of your spell
You can do no wrong
For the truth comes from your lips
A king of your mountain

But alas with your moment of perfection
Others will want the high ground in lies
And human nature as is
Will hear the evil again
In storming retribution

For we can only last in a speck of time
In the purity of Gods light
Reaching that my wish will be answered
For then you can take my fireworks away
For the fear it might explode in you
For that moment in time so blessed

Email me at davelyoung1@hotmail.com
D.Lester Young (04/16/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-04-18 10:10 AM

Nice write...I enjoyed the imagery in the first verse.

~sky

I'm in charge, and I say question authority!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-04-18 10:13 AM

DLYoung~

'An awakening has appeared'

Yes, and this is beautiful testimony to it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-18 05:52 PM

"But alas with your moment of perfection
Others will want the high ground in lies
And human nature as is
Will hear the evil again
In storming retribution

For we can only last in a speck of time
In the purity of Gods light
Reaching that my wish will be answered
For then you can take my fireworks away
For the fear it might explode in you
For that moment in time so blessed"

BRAVO!!! Yes, He will always bring retribution to all our fears and woes and He will forever cradle us in His light and fill us with the love we need always to carry on and be fulfilled! (big hugggsssss) All we have to do is ask and He will bring us peace and comfort, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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